I felt that the presentation went okay but I always feel really nervous and scared as I hate speaking in front of a crowd of people even if I know them but saying that I would rather had performed that presentation in front of people I don’t know. I don't think that my speech was clear because I felt my voice shake. Even though I didn’t research and plan my speech I thought that the content was appropriate to the topic I was talking about. My body language wasn’t very good because I was really nervous that I was stopping my leg shake from being noticeable. I think that I could have planned my speech better as opposed to only having a few pointers on the list I had written to plan the speech. If I hadn’t messed up the planning then I think that the presentation would have been better also I think that the presentation would have been better if I wasn't as nervous other than that I thought it went alright.
Your nervousness didn't show and you managed to mention several facts relevant to the topic. Good evaluation with some good and bad points and you have plenty to put into your PDP.
I feel that the comments given were quite helpful in helping me with feedback on how I can improve planning presentation and also how I can present in presentations better. Overall I do agree with the feedback given. Although I did feel a difference in the way that I was speaking when I was giving the presentation because I was so nervous but as the feedback says it didn't show which is alright.
